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« on: September 10, 2008, 02:49:36 pm »

Okay, here's one:

Abstruse
the stars and I have seen you shine
have you burned out already?

streams of light have all melted
leaving nothing but dust to choke

play me one more song so I can dance
I promise not to fall this time

there is so much I want to tell you that
my tongue suffers every night

can a strong heart ever be swallowed?
drowned by tears?

it's the small pauses that keep me
those little pieces all tucked away
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« Reply #1 on: September 10, 2008, 02:51:54 pm »

Very nice, it`s a little sad.
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« Reply #2 on: September 10, 2008, 03:15:14 pm »

Here's another:

Nice or naughty
naughty or nice
everything melts when
there's fire and ice.

Should you do good
or should you be bad?
Good is all golden
when pain's to be had.

(Things are amazing with
ginger and spice, but
everything melts when
there's fire and ice.)

Do you fan the flame
or is it all the same?
Your halo's all soiled
with bitter and shame.

You poor tortured soul
life has taken its toll
are you asking forgiveness
or raking the coals?

I'll ask you again
what is your true vice?
Are you naughty for good
or fighting for nice?
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« Reply #3 on: September 10, 2008, 03:16:39 pm »

I really really like this one!!!
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« Reply #4 on: September 10, 2008, 03:22:07 pm »

Thanks, Clouds!  Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: September 10, 2008, 03:26:12 pm »

Thank you, for posting your poetry.  Smiley
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« Reply #6 on: September 11, 2008, 06:44:05 am »

That is nice writing.
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« Reply #7 on: September 11, 2008, 10:47:30 am »

thanks!  Wink
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« Reply #8 on: September 11, 2008, 10:52:48 am »

Music
A sweet sway and what can I say
Your words torture but keep me
and I always said I love roller coasters....

Give me one more ride,
twist my stomach and heave my heart,
as long as I can feel you.

Smooth hypnotizing rhythm helps me
escape
and sleep
and breathe
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« Reply #9 on: December 13, 2008, 09:22:27 am »

You have talent very good!!! heart heart
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« Reply #10 on: December 14, 2008, 10:21:51 am »

Great poem, Camillus!
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« Reply #11 on: December 15, 2008, 09:45:33 am »

Why thank you ladies.  Wink
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